THE ADVENCHER

                    the advencher BY NATHAN  . 

(CHAPTER 1) a long time ago Jack was a explora in a helicopter and then pow a massive  jerk hit the propeller of the helicopter and Jack tumbled to the edge of the freeing cold water Jack relist were he was he was in the lost city of Atlantis helicopter haden,t got that much energy left but it cold get jack somewhere just then he saw a huge ice monster.

 crash!!! out of the cold snow it jumt up with the speed of a jet and crash!!! it gave a big jolt on the long end of the helicopter. jack was terafid he new he coldent give up now. it was my only hope I jumt out of the helicopter and landed in the coldest snow I had ever felt. and he ran and RAN and then  Jack lost his enagey and colapst but then jack saw a flashing lite it gave him hope so he stamerd towards it then he saw an old women she had a crinkeld face and she wor a dress with sqwars on it and she had a had that was old and toran the first thing she said was you look cold wold you like some hot drink jack was freked out I men you don,t just find an old women in the middel of nower and she askes you if you want a drink. anyway jack went inside and he colapsed on the nice ferm carpet. he was so rileved to be in a nice house like this then she fliked her hand and all the stiks in the house went on fire. this was amazing then Jack asked what are you some kind a witch ,,no,, she said in a happy way.,,I have the power of lite,,. ,,okay,, I anserd but how did you servive in this cold ,,oh that it was eysey all I did was cover my house with snow so i wold blend in well of corse you wold now that wold you.,,okay that is weird,, Jack said. then she gave Jack a nice worm drink he felt better after that. ,,now,, she said tell me what are you doing out in this nastey wether. ,,just serching for things,, he said calmley. then she said ,, well then you better be off ,, then she gave Jack a sled it was the 20003 sled the fastes sled in the wold. then she set  of on jack,s juney then she souded back to me MAY THE GODS BE WITH YOU!!!! jack new he was on my way to becomeing a grate explora. but then that thort failed when he saw a frosen lake with a stachu in the midel. then my mosse broke free of the rope that was pulling Jack,s sled and ran off ,,grate,, he said then he hoped out of the sled and started walking threw the big long ice he felt a big thump when he hit the ground with ech step he took the ground crakeld under him. when he was about  three inches away from the stachu the ground shook and out of nowere a huge fish craceld up and swolowd the stachu hole.

(CHAPTER 2 )Jack stood there frozen in his track,s then CRAK!!! the ground broke and then heps of tiney fish jumt up from the ice. they looked like paranas but bigger and creper then the ice brok into heps of peces then Jack was floting away with only a stik in the cold block of ice. but then he had a ider he piked up the stick and he started whacking all the fish that came nere. Jack then a fish that he,d never seen  jumped out  and pow slaped him in the face and dived back down in the water ,,come on,, he said then again the fish came up and trid to slap him agan but  Jack smaced it with his stick and it fell into the water yes he said but I took that back when the huge fish came up again it looked bigger. maby because of the stachu it had eten then it starded comeing towords Jack so with his stik he padled but it wasent enogh and he coldent swim he wold diy in secon,s so when he was one meter away he took the risk he jumt as far as he cold but before he got there WOSH! a gigantic snow owl picked me up and cared me away. a few houers later it droped him and hit the ground with a big thump !!! ow he said. then it started fling around me. and then on the tip of a tree branch I saw a portel and that could get me out of this place. so I got out the rope that Jack took on the jurny and started to climb down. then the huge bird picked him up again with its big sharp  claw,s and put him back down. so you want a game do you Jack thort so he trid again this time the birds grate big claws missed and Jack plunged into the portal. the next thing he new he was ling face first in a forist. Jack dident know that he was being wached  the trees looked like they were moving. then he herd a  voce say,, hey what do you supos it is. then the trees surrounded him with big truncks that were used as arms the trees were like dogs but bigger then Jack started running he was faster than the trees. and he colapsed when they were out of site. what is happening to me he thort. then Jack saw another best  what cold it be now. Then a monster jumped out at Jack it had a scaly back with pich black eys and a tail that looked like it cold kill somebady in a instint. it had long legs and a spiky main i took my sord out of my scabern and thrusted it the crecher lunged at me but i rold  over then the crecher bounced me to the ground and i boged its tail but I wasend kwick enogh to doge the second and it hit my arm I tride to fight but I had no enigy left them my vishon whent black and i was taken to a under ground manshon when I woke up I saw gold and then I saw the monster butIi coldent get closer I was in a cage!!!. then I saw my sord it was on top of the cage.but it was far to high for me to rech it. then I relisd that the crecher was sleeping. then I had an ider if I cold get to my sord I cold kill the crecher get the key and get out of here so I set to werk geting my sord  and then when I just tuched the sord i saw the crechers ears twich i trid agan and its holbady woke up!!! i had to get my sord and fast the bcrecher saw me I reched for the sord rhe crecher got closer and it leped at me... but I already had the sord and then smak it ran strat into the sord. I gave a siy of rilef that it was over. now to find that key. then I saw it it was floting  were I had killed the monster so I grabed it and carried on my jurny

.a few days latter I saw a portal finaly I thot just as i was about to rech it when a huge snake leped out at me. I tride to kill it but it was way to fast it looked about (50 FEET) long it was a terafing site to see. then it striked again. i dodged it lunged then I thrust-ed and it holed in pain then I drove it as far away from the portal as I cold then I ran for it the snake was fast I sprinted but the snack was faster it blocked my path and i ran away i new i couldn't do it then I pland a sneeck atack a few hours later I did my plan i ran for the portal but the snack l wok up and lifted its head high then i did my plan i had tide a rope to a rock i grabed it and tide it to a tree then the snack slitherd after me the huge crecher wasent far behind then i jumped out of the way of the rope the beast hit the rope with a crash then it got tangelt in it. i had saved some rope from a tree and tied tghe crecher up the snack was to strong and it brock the rope in a instant then i siad to my self ,time for plan B,i leped on the snacks back and started to clim up. the beast was disturbed buy this and tride to shack me off. ,your not going to get me off that easy, i said then when i got to the top i struck my sord down the creacher howled in pain. then i shoock me off with the force of a rihno then the crecher was pushed to the ground by something brown and big. it was the trees that Jack had run away from the trees looked at me with a face that i did not know. hello it said.  hello i said back then i said wold you hold that snack up then it said yes they said the snack was held up by the trees and Jack was held up by the trees to he jumped out of its hands and Jack thrusted my sord onto the snake he ran down it body as the snack howled in pain red ozz ran down from its body .

the snak hit the ground with a mighty crash and Jack made his way  to the portal. then he found himself on a mouton surrounded by clouds .